What does a corporate historian do for summer reading? Mine included Stephen Fried's fascinating business history Appetite for America: Fred Harvey and the Business of Civilizing the Wild West--One Meal at a Time. (The subtitle is a bit overstated. There were native civilizations in the west for millennia; they just weren't WASPs like British immigrant Fred.) It was named one of the 10 best books of 2010 by both The Wall Street Journal and the Philadelphia Inquirer, yet it might well be difficult for such a book even to find a mainstream publisher today. The level of detail is exhaustive.
The hospitality company that bore Fred Harvey's name really did pioneer "the chaining of America" well before Howard Johnson, McDonald's Ray Kroc, and all the other chains that now proliferate. The company is best remembered for its female employees, fictionalized in a novel and an MGM musical with Judy Garland. I enjoyed learning about them via Leslie Poling-Kempes's The Harvey Girls: The Women Who Opened the West (1989), a narrative built around oral histories done in the 1980s. I'm looking forward to downloading a one-hour Harvey Girls video by Assertion Films (2014), cover shown above.
How sad that the Fred Harvey Company never produced a corporate history. Nor did the execs or heirs invest in proper archiving. Chunks and bits of Harvey history are scattered across histories of the Atchison, Topeka and Santa Fe Railway, physical locations, and numerous websites. Too many of the latter yield "Page Not Found" error messages -- including, inexcusably, that of Xanterra, the conglomerate that now owns the Harvey name and the historic Grand Canyon South Rim holdings. There's a nod to Harvey on Xanterra's one-paragraph About Us page, but that's all. What a wasted opportunity! Commandment 3 of CorporateHistory.net's 10 Commandments of About Us Pages: Reveal Thy Personality.
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Wednesday, September 2, 2015
Fred Harvey: Rise & Fall of a Pioneering Brand
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Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Happy 100th, National Park Service
For its 100th anniversary, the U.S. National Park Service has erected a handsome if glitchy centennial web portal. Readers can delve into:
- Stories of individual parks (Find Your Park)
- Future plans (Building on Success)
- Visionary Leaders (such as environmentalist Marjory Stoneman Douglas, shown above with a feline friend; Douglas's book, The Everglades: River of Grass, published in 1947, describes "the natural treasure she fought so hard to protect").
- and a call to action (Get Involved); this is always a good idea, especially for a perennially underfunded institution such as NPS
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Monday, August 3, 2015
Union Square Hospitality Group: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
Danny Meyer’s first restaurant (opened when he was 27 years
old) is the award-winning Union Square Cafe, which has held the top spot in Zagat’s
New York City restaurant guide nine times. Under the name Union Square Hospitality
Group, Meyer also runs the Gramercy Tavern, a catering service, and restaurants
at the Museum of Modern Art and the Whitney, among others. Together these have
won 26 prestigious James Beard Foundation awards. And let’s not forget the
ubiquitous Shake Shacks. The main About Us page is Company.
OVERALL GRADE: B
Products/Services: B
The above-the-fold graphic on the Company page is (how rare!) full of
solid business history content: when the company opened its first restaurant
and its first Shake Shack, number of Beard Awards, number of employees with the
company for more than ten years, and so on. It’s concise and attractive. Adding
links to pages with more information - for example, a list of Beard Awards
received – would be a great idea.
The text below the graphic gets a slow start with an
abstract discussion of what it means to enrich lives. For the sake of fickle
web-surfers and those of us who appreciate corporate storytelling, why not
start with the second paragraph: “We’ve created some of New York City’s most
beloved and celebrated restaurants ...” ?
We appreciate the clever text of the timeline (History), which has catchy
phrases such as “elegant and fiercely seasonal cuisine.” But once the corporate
history has made our mouths start to water, why not offer us links to the
websites of the restaurants mentioned on the timeline?
Personality: B
Our Commandment
3 of About Us pages is, “Reveal thy personality.” Danny Meyer, founder of
the Union Square Hospitality Group, unfortunately isn’t given much space on the
Company and
History pages. There is a page is devoted to
his book Setting the Table: The
Transforming Power of Hospitality in Business, with a sidebar that offers a
thought-provoking quote of substantial length from Meyer (bravo!). Digging into
the People and Leaders pages, we found a
good bio of
Meyer. But ... we assume that as the founder, it’s his ideas and his drive
that have led to the award-winning quality of his restaurants as well as his
focus on philanthropy (see Community).
Why not have him explain in his own words why he made these choices and where
he plans to go from here? That would make for compelling corporate
storytelling.
Accessibility: C
The Contact
page (available from the footer) offers a mailing address, phone, and email
address, with social media icons). This is adequate.
TAKEAWAY
Even if you’re proud of the stellar team your company has
assembled, don’t be afraid to let the founder’s or leader’s personality shine
through in your About Us pages: it’ll give visitors a much better sense of what
makes your company tick.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, July 20, 2015
L.L. Bean: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
L.L. Bean was founded in 1912 in Freeport, Maine, by Leon
Leonwood Bean, to sell a single product – the “Maine Hunting Shoe.” The company
now has about 5,000 employees, and annual sales of $1.61 billion. Its
headquarters is still in Freeport, Maine, and it is still privately owned. The
main About Us page is Company
Information.
OVERALL GRADE: A
Products/Services: A
minus
The Company
Information page looks at first like a raging
bore: long, dense, and with headings that are less than enticing (“Current
Corporate Information,” “Products,” “Manufacturing,” etc.). In fact, however, the
page is great corporate storytelling. It explains what the company does, and
where and why and how. As a series of bullet points this sort of information would
be unreadable. It’s fascinating here because we’re given a backstory (for
example, the reason behind each expansion) and provided with several engaging quotes
from past and present leaders of the company.
One quibble: many people read on their phones, where it’s easy
to be interrupted and to lose one’s place on a very long page. A simple
solution would be to split this page into separate pages for Products,
Manufacturing, etc. – with copious links between pages, so that visitors would
still be guided to read them in a certain sequence. Our Commandment
6 of About Us pages is, “Honor thy visuals.” Shorter pages on a specific
topics could be made even more interesting by including photos from L.L. Bean’s
century-long history.
There are numerous, excellent photos on the timeline, 100
Years and Counting. It’s cleverly compiled so that reading the blurb on
each decade gives a visitor a short company history. The focus is on L.L. Bean,
Inc. – as it should be - but enough national events are listed to set the
context. There’s even an option for customers to share their own L.L. Bean
stories – a great idea. Unfortunately, during our four visits to the site, the
interactive aspect wasn’t working, so we’re not sure we’ve seen all of it.
High marks to the Newsroom
page, which puts company press releases front and center, but has a sidebar,
“As Seen In,” with links to products featured in sources as diverse as Redbook, Elle, and Field & Stream.
A downgrade: Yes, the company commissioned a centennial
anniversary book, entitled Guaranteed to
Last: L.L.Bean's Century of Outfitting America, by Jim Gorman.
(CorporateHistory.net was not involved with it in any way.) Alas, there’s no
reference to it on the history pages. To find it, we had to enter “book” in the
product search box. If you’re still selling your corporate history book, why
not make it easy to find?
Personality: A
The Company
History page is also long, dense, and excellent. It begins as the story of
an outdoorsman with wet feet, and tells how he solved the problem with the
original “Maine Hunting Shoe.” Bean’s early trials and tribulations – 90 of his
original 100 pairs were returned – establish the company’s dedication to
quality and customer satisfaction. This is business history at its best.
Quotes from the founder and from later leaders liven up the
text, as do occasional fascinating factoids. We learn, for example, that by the
1930s, L.L. Bean’s mail-order business comprised more than 70% of the volume of
the Freeport post office, and that the flagship store has no locks, because
it’s open for business 24/7.
The list of awards at the end of the Company
History page would get more attention if it were on a separate page, with
logos, but it’s great to see so many confirmations of L.L. Bean’s status collected
in one place.
In a lovely change from celebrating one’s centennial and
then forgetting about company anniversaries for 10 or 25 years, the Company
History page ends with highlights of L.L. Bean’s centennial year. Here
you’ll find quick bullet-point references to the aforementioned centennial
book, as well as the timeline—but these should be hyperlinked.
The Leadership
page is top-notch. Why? Because the bio of the founder and his three successors
all focus on the values that drive them as leaders of L.L. Bean, and on the
results they achieved there. Even the philanthropic activities and hobbies mentioned
reflect the values of the company: for example, membership in the Audubon Society
and the Nature Conservancy. Our Commandment
3 of About Us pages is, “Reveal thy personality.” We’ve seldom seen that
done better than on L.L. Bean’s site.
Accessibility: A
How many times have you flinched from phoning a company’s Customer
Service line because you were worried that the representative wouldn’t be able
to speak English? L.L. Bean’s Customer
Service page begins with a characteristically forthright note: no matter
how you communicate with the company (there are options for Phone, Call Me,
Chat, Email, and more), you’ll be speaking with a person in Maine: “because
Maine is more than just an address – it’s part of who we are. It’s tough
winters, Yankee ingenuity and a unique character you just won’t find
elsewhere.”
TAKEAWAY
Your company may not have the size or the hundred-hear
history of L.L. Bean, but it’s unique in who founded it, where it’s been, and
where it’s heading. Make your About Us page reflect that uniqueness with great
content, well told.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for us?),
and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company, although we have been
satisfied customers for years.
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Monday, July 6, 2015
Dockers: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
Dockers, established in 1986, is the division of San
Francisco-based Levi Strauss & Co. that’s devoted to khakis and casual
accessories. It’s a leading brand of business casual clothing for men and women.
We were curious to look at Dockers because it’s part of a larger company, but
has its own brand. The main About Us page is here.
OVERALL GRADE: C
minus
The biggest flaw in this set of About Us pages is that we
found them via a Google search, and can’t find a link to them on Dockers’ own
site.
The main page has two headings, each with a distinctive
tagline: Our Products (“Well-crafted comfort to help conquer the day,” with
links to pages on size and fit) and Our Company (“A rough and tough work ethic
is deeply rooted in our family tree”). Below these are links to Contact Us and
Careers. It’s a simple, clear layout that works almost as well on a desktop as
on mobile. (In fact, these pages are among the least offensive mobile-friendly
pages we’ve seen, in terms of layout, because the header images are much less
high than wide. Hence on a desktop screen, they don’t fill all of the prime above-the-fold
real estate.)
Products/Services: A
Under the Our Company heading on the About Us page are links
to About Levi
Strauss & Co., History and
Heritage, and Social
Responsibility.
About
Levi Strauss & Co. has a pithy statement linking the current brand to
the long corporate history of Levi Strauss. One minor glitch: this opening
statement says the first blue jeans were created in 1853. Further down the
page, under “Our Values,” the “Originality” blurb gives the date as 1873. Our Commandment
9 of About Us pages is, “Worship clarity.” An error such as this leaves the
impression that someone isn’t minding the details.
The Timeline (“History
and Heritage”) is good corporate storytelling. It focuses on the long history
of khaki pants at Levi Strauss, then offers nostalgic glimpses of pop culture (Seinfeld) and advertising history (“Nice
pants!”). Haute couture and culture are represented by names such as Alexander
Wang and Vanity Fair. Each timeline entry
has an intriguing headline, a short blurb, and an archival image – all large
enough to see easily. Having done a timeline or two ourselves (such as this one for California’s State Compensation
Insurance Fund) we appreciate the design and content of the Dockers example.
Personality: D
The Timeline is
excellent for showing where the company has been, but not for showing what its
current goals are. No information or links are given for the company’s
leadership. Mentioning Levi-Strauss as a parent company doesn’t fill this gap,
since there are no links to Levi-Strauss’s leadership team, either.
Accessibility: E
The Contact Us page
(accessible via the main About Us page or the Help link in the footer) is elegant
in layout but quite confusing. The options are “Find a Store” or “Get Help.” Clicking
“Get Help” sends us to a page with the
options “Contact Us,” “Send Feedback,” “Find a Store,” or “Top Reads” (a FAQ). But
clicking either “Contact Us” or “Send Feedback” takes us right back to the Contact Us page. So in fact, the only ways to reach Dockers are
via the 800 number in the footer and the online email form that is (we
eventually noticed) below the fold on the Contact Us page.
Our Commandment
8 of About Us pages is, “Remember to make yourself and your organization
easily accessible.” Dockers, do you really want to hear from us?
TAKEAWAY
Have a fresh pair of eyes (or two or ten) look at your About
Us pages for obvious errors, including whether those pages can be easily discovered
and whether visitors to the site can contact you easily.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, June 22, 2015
Yiddish Book Center: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
In 1980 Aaron Lansky, a 24-year-old grad student in Yiddish
literature, realized that thousands of books in Yiddish were being destroyed by
Jews who could not read the language of their parents and grandparents. He set
out to rescue these works, to disseminate them, and to promote wider
understanding of their content and their place in history. Today, after
recovering more than a million volumes, the Yiddish Book Center (based in
Amherst, Massachusetts) is a leading Jewish cultural organization, primarily
responsible for the current revival of Yiddish studies. The main About Us page
is Who We Are.
OVERALL GRADE: A
Products/Services: A
Bravo to the Yiddish Book Center for an About Us page that begins
with a pithy summary of the organization’s mission: “The Yiddish Book Center is
a non-profit organization working to tell the whole Jewish story by rescuing,
translating, and disseminating Yiddish books and presenting innovative
educational programs that broaden understanding of modern Jewish identity.” Then
come specifics of the organization’s activities (fellowships, translations,
oral histories) and a summary of its status (“one of the world’s largest,
liveliest, and most original Jewish organizations”). For those who want more,
the page ends with a link to Our Story. A lovely photo
shows the Center in its rural setting. A sidebar offers information from the
founder and ways to join the Center’s mailing list or follow it on social
media. All this is elegantly laid out to fit into less than 2 screens on a
laptop. (The goat silhouette, which recurs throughout the site, is a nice
light-hearted touch.)
Our
Story is also top-notch. It focuses on the founder: the problem he saw
(Yiddish books being destroyed) and his solution (send out volunteers to
collect them). Then the narrative segues to the Center’s current activities and
its plans for the future. The sidebar on this page links to the founder’s
memoirs: an excellent choice, given that those who have read so far are clearly
interested in the Center’s history.
We commend what may seem a minor detail of the layout: the
caption beneath the video. It tells us what the video contains and that it’s
award-winning, which helps us to decide whether to invest 13 minutes to watch
it.
Given that Our Story is a good narrative, we don’t miss headings
and photos as much as we often do when confronted with a page of dense text.
Still, images of some of the more spectacular of the Center’s “rescue efforts”
would make great illustrations - and might even benefit the center by teaching
people who are completely ignorant of Yiddish to recognize it.
Personality: A
Kudos to the Yiddish Book Center for keeping founder and
president Aaron Lansky front and center. On the Staff page, he’s hauling a
box of books. Images are crucial in setting a mood on any web page, and this image
makes it immediately obvious that the Center is a down-to-earth organization run
by a guy who’s willing to lend a hand to get things done.
Visually, the extra space given to his bio makes it obvious
that he’s the Center’s directing force. Oddly, many corporate leadership pages are
severely egalitarian: you wouldn’t know who the head honcho was from the space
given on the page layout.
Our Commandment
4 of About Us pages is, “Don’t take your own name in vain.” Lansky’s bio
mentions coverage of the Center by the New
York Times, Time, and Smithsonian,
as well as “numerous awards and recognitions.” Why not link to the articles and
list the awards? That would reinforce the fact that the Center is doing a
superlative job at fulfilling its mission.
We hoped to find links to such information on the News page, but found only a
list of the Center’s blog entries – interesting and well laid out, but not the
sort of affirmation that comes from outside recognition.
Accessibility: A
High points to the Center also for its Contact page, accessible
via the footer and the top navigation bar. This page offers an impressive
choice of 12 email addresses. Incidentally, the vintage typewriter is cute, but
we’d still prefer to see some photos of the books the Center has rescued.
TAKEAWAY
Especially if your founder is still in charge, use his
passion to set the tone for your About Us pages and to help explain your
company’s mission.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, June 8, 2015
Books-a-Million: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
In Florence, Alabama, in 1917, Clyde W. Anderson set up a newsstand.
With the profits from it, he bought a bookstore. His sons built more stores,
incorporating them under the name “Bookland” in 1964. Bookland survives as a
subsidiary of Books-a-Million, which since 1988 has become a chain of over 200
superstores, mostly in the southeastern United States. The company went public
in 1992. It is the second largest book retailer in the country. The closest
thing to an About Us page is Corporate Profile.
OVERALL GRADE: D
Products/Services: D
The Corporate
Profile page provides a good summary of the
current size and scope of Books-a-Million, along with its operating divisions. But
the page consists entirely of small type and a few headers. Our Commandment
6 of About Us pages is, “Honor thy visuals.” Archival photos of early locations,
early signage, or previous logos would liven up this page. More importantly, the
page seems to be aimed at possible investors rather than customers. It conveys no
sense of excitement about the products and services the company provides, nor
its essential business history. Book people, especially, have an obligation to
be corporate storytellers.
Personality: E
Completely missing from the Corporate Profile page is the story of the company’s century-long
development. Who founded it? What was their driving purpose? What did they do
right, and where and when, that helped make the company last so long?
At the foot of the page is a list of directors and corporate
officers. Each is listed with name, title, and nothing else: no capsule bios,
no contact info, no hint of their goals for Books-a-Million. According to
Wikipedia, the company was founded by Clyde W. Anderson. On the Corporate Profile page, the first two names under Board of Directors
are Clyde B. Anderson and Terry C. Anderson. Hey, bet there’s a family
connection there! Why not tell us about it?
Accessibility: B
The contact page is available via a link on the top
navigation bar. It offers a list of mailing addresses, emails, and (sometimes)
telephone numbers for questions about retail stores, the website, the company,
complaints, employment, and media relations.
TAKEAWAY
Your corporate history is a powerful tool for setting your
company apart from the crowd. Use it!
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Tuesday, May 26, 2015
Kaye Scholer LLP: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
The law firm founded by Benjamin Kay and Jacob Scholer in
New York City in 1917 now has more than 450 attorneys in New York, Chicago, Los
Angeles, Palo Alto, Washington, D.C., West Palm Beach, Frankfurt, London, and
Shanghai. With an international reputation as a litigation firm, it specializes
in product liability, antitrust, and intellectual property. The About Us page
is here.
OVERALL GRADE: B
Products/Services: B
Kaye Scholer’s main About Us page is packed with
information, beginning with a summary of the company history (100 years in
2017) and moving on to cover which industries it works with extensively, how it
functions as a strategic business partner, and why it is uniquely qualified to
deal with complex issues in a cost-effective way. As a testimonial, the page
mentions that 83 clients have been working with Kaye Scholer for more than 20
years.
Additional links within the text would be helpful. For
example, when mentioning in-depth knowledge of core industries, why not link to
the Practice
Groups page? When mentioning introductions between the firm’s clients, why
not link to a page that gives examples?
Although the About Us page looks dense, the material is broken into four separate headings and
numerous paragraphs, so it’s easy to get through. Still, it’s great to see a
prominent link to the Breakthroughs
brochure (a PDF), which highlights recent victories by the firm in a variety of
industries and includes excellent summaries, illustrations, and testimonials.
Kaye Scholer is frequently mentioned in the media. Bravo for
having a Newsroom page that
gathers links to such stories. Logos of the publications quoted would add visual
interest to the page.
Personality &
Accessibility: B
Our Commandment
8 of About Us pages is, “Remember to make yourself and your organization
easily accessible.” Kaye Scholer does that for both offices and personnel. The
page listing Kaye Scholer offices
worldwide offers the address and phone of each office, with a Google map of the location. (We actually prefer the arrangement as it stood a month or so ago, which used a columnar format to show an iconic photo of the city, a
phone and address, and a link to Google maps for the location.) Clicking on any
city leads to a page with a blurb about the specialties of that office, the
name of the managing partner, and related press releases.
Kaye Scholer personnel can be
searched by name, position, practice area, office, or school attended. For each
person there’s a page with a bio, photo, email, phone, and notes on his
specialties and education, plus the option to download a vCard for easy
importation into one’s email contacts. Well done.
In the big-picture, long-term view: why is there no
information about the founders of the firm? Its 100-year organizational history
is mentioned several times, but without any reference to the lawyers who
started it. Business anniversary tip: Use
the story of your founders to convey the continuation of core values.
TAKEAWAY
Approaching any milestone – a decade, a quarter century, a
century – gives you bragging rights. Take advantage of your corporate history
to show clients where you’ve come from and what to expect in the future.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, May 11, 2015
Boeing: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
In the era when airplanes were still built of wood, William
Boeing's work in the timber industry near Seattle gave him the experience to
break into aviation. In 1916 he incorporated "Pacific Aero Products
Co.," which later became Boeing. The company has a century-long string of
firsts and mosts in aviation. Today Boeing is one of the world's largest
airplane manufacturers, the second-largest defense contractor in the world, and
the largest exporter in the United States (by dollar value). Its stock is a
component of the Dow Jones Industrial Average. The main About Us page might be
either History or Our Company: see next section.
OVERALL GRADE: D
The top navigation menu on Boeing’s home page offers History, with tabs for Overview,
Products, Strategic Airpower, Pioneers, and Founders Video. Several slots to
the right on the Home page navigation menu is Our Company. On the History page,
there’s no reference to the company’s current size and preeminent status in the
aerospace industry. On Our Company,
there’s no reference to Boeing’s distinguished, near-100-year history. At the
very least, there should be multiple links between these sets of pages. As they
stand, they suggest that the company’s history has little to do with its
current state.
Products/Services: C
Our Commandment
7 of About Us pages is, “Remember to keep the navigation easy.” We’re not
sure who designed the navigation on this site: we hope they don’t do maps for
pilots.
The General
Information tab is called “Boeing in Brief” on the page and “Overview” on
one of the nav menus. It offers a solid summary of the company’s size and
worldwide reach, as well as the company’s divisions: commercial airplanes,
defense, engineering / operations / technology, etc. But it needs links to
pages dealing with those sections (e.g., the list of Products for the
commercial airplanes heading), so the visitor doesn’t have to stumble around
the site if he’s interested in a particular topic. The Boeing site has great
information, but it’s not easy to access.
There’s also an uneasy balance (which we are seeing more and
more often) between web design for desktops and for smartphones. The History page, for example, opens with
a huge photo that occupies most of the screen on a desktop. (On a smartphone
held portrait-wise, it takes up barely a quarter of the screen.) Clicking on a
submenu such as Products takes you further down the same page. To get to the
actual list of products, you have to click another link, to a page with yet
another huge above-the-fold photo, and then scroll through a two-column list of
airplanes, with, alas, no images to help you along. But once you get to the
page for the DC-9
(for example), there’s an interesting, informative write-up, including the airplane’s
specs and the history of its manufacture and use. On this page, which concerns
one particular airplane, the huge photo at the top of the page makes sense.
The timeline that appears under History / Strategic
Airpower offers great images and intriguing facts. But its navigation is bafflingly
complex. One arrow directs us to scroll down. At the left is a timeline with
clickable years. At the upper right is an arrow that brings up informative text
and photos, with a row of clickable airplane silhouettes. At the lower left is
an arrow that makes headlines pop up. Clicking on this and that and the other
graphic made my head spin like a propeller. I moved on without knowing how much
of it I’d actually seen.
Personality: C
Kudos to Boeing for including a long list of Pioneers, not only for Boeing
for but for McDonnell Douglas and other companies that have become part of
Boeing. Too often, the history of a company that was taken over fades into
oblivion.
But here, too, there are navigation problems. On the Pioneers subpage of the Our Company menu is a good short bio
of William
E. Boeing, with a link to a longer version in PDF. But why, oh why, is
there no link to the excellent video of him that’s
available under History? Business anniversary tip: That video
is a terrific example of how to use archival footage to make your corporate
history come alive. Assuming Boeing celebrates its centennial next year, the
video deserves a place of honor.
The pages on Boeing’s current leaders are, unfortunately,
not so impressive. The page for the
CEO, W. James McNerney, Jr., gives scads of details about his experience at
other companies, but says absolutely nothing about his vision for Boeing. A bio
on the Boeing page needs Boeing-oriented information.
Accessibility: E
The Contact
Us page (buried in the footer under Popular Links) seems to be aimed only at
people who might want to make suggestions for the web page, rather than contact
the company for business purposes. “We do welcome your comments about our site,
as they help us in identifying new areas of interest for future content. ... If
you still need help, contact the Boeing Webmaster using the below form.” The
Media are given a link to a separate page.
This is a major lapse. Clients and investors should at least
be given a link to a page with contact information for them.
TAKEAWAY
Use your company history, but also tell people about the
company’s current goals. And always be sure potential clients can reach you.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, April 27, 2015
Rado: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
The Rado brand launched its first collection of watches in
1957, but the company history goes back to Schlup & Co., who had been
producing watch movements in Lengnau, Switzerland, since 1917. Rado’s forte is
the use of sophisticated materials such as high-tech ceramics: they produced
the first scratch-proof watches. Today the company, still headquartered in
Lengnau, has some 470 employees and is part of the Swatch Group. The main About Us page appears when you
click “About Rado” in the top menu.
OVERALL GRADE: D
Products/Services: D
The big problem with the Rado About Us page is obvious from its
opening lines: “2010s. 2013 -
Rado further develops its use of ultra-light high-tech ceramic, presenting the
DiaMaster RHW1 in ‘old bronze’ coloured Si3N4 TiN. ...” This is the page that
appears when you click “About Rado” in the top menu, but there’s no summary of
the company: what it produces, where it’s located (if you’re a Swiss company
making watches, surely location matters!), what market its products are aimed
at. Our Commandment
1 of About Us pages is, “Know thy audience.” The first About Us page ought
to be self-sufficient. Rado’s is not.
Rado has excellent photos ... on two completely different
timelines, one of which counts backward, the other forward. The one on the main
About Us page is, as we said
above, so abstruse that a layman is unlikely to understand it. The Design Milestones timeline (under About Rado / Rado & Design) works
forward from 1958, describing specific watches and what made each innovative.
Its text is easier to grasp, but needs work. For example, we’re told that the
1981 Anatom was the first Rado watch “that exhibits a curved ergonomic form in
order to “[this quotation is never closed] embrace the wrist with anatomical
perfection. The design of the Anatom dial is reduced to keep its minimalism ...”
For a Swiss watchmaker not to be precise plays havoc with
our preconceptions. Our Commandment
9 of About Us pages is, “Worship clarity.” If you’re translating web pages
for an international audience, have them proofed by someone fluent in the
language.
Personality: D
The Rado
People page is elegantly laid out. But we expected it to list the company’s
management; instead, it talks about the celebrities who wear Rado watches. There’s
precious little elsewhere on the site about Rado’s corporate history. Although
the timeline on the main About Us
page goes back to 1917 (the founding of Schlup & Co. clockwork factory in
Lengnau), we’ve been unable to discover on the Rado site what the relationship is
between Schlup & Co. and Rado.
Accessibility: C
The Contact Us
page (reached via a link at the end of the footer, under “Keep in Touch”) has a
mailing address, phone number, and an online form. This is minimal but
acceptable.
TAKEAWAY
Always start your About Us page with a brief summary of your
company, geared to your target audience. If you’re going to mention your history
(and you should!), be sure to give some details that make it impressive.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, April 13, 2015
NJ Transit: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
NJ Transit was established by the Public Transportation Act
of 1979 to operate mass transit within New Jersey and to New York City and
Philadelphia. It absorbed the transit business that had been run by Public
Service, New Jersey’s largest utility company, since PS’s founding in 1903. (In
those days, the routes included not just buses and trains but trolleys and
streetcars.) NJ Transit also subsumed many private bus lines and took over
Conrail routes in 1983. With some 220 million passenger-trips per year, NJ
Transit is the third largest provider in the United States of bus, rail, and
light rail transit. NJ Transit’s About Us page is here.
OVERALL GRADE: E
Products/Services: E
NJ Transit has one and only one About Us page, with numerous
subheads: Directions / Address & Phone; History & Structure; Executive
Director; Board Members; Board Agenda / Meeting Minutes / Video; and so on. Our
Commandment
1 of About Us pages is, “Know thy audience.” It’s not clear for whom this
page is written.
Visually, this is not a welcoming page. It’s difficult to
read the introductory paragraphs, since they’re set in a small font and long
lines. Enlarging the size in the browser merely makes the lines run off the
screen. A couple boldly designed maps to show NJ Transit’s rail network or bus
routes would break up the dense text and offer a visual summary of the
company’s scope.
Another problem: all those headings. No attempt is made to
show which are related, for example by grouping together all the ones that deal
with administration. Also, the headings are all in the same style, but they
don’t all behave the same way. Sometimes clicking on the arrow next to a
heading makes subheads appear: sometimes not. Sometimes clicking on the heading
makes a paragraph or two drop down. Sometimes it sends you to another page
(without a “return” option), or opens a PDF. For the headings with drop-down
text, there’s no option to expand all.
As for corporate history: there is none. Not even a glancing
mention is given to the bus and rail services that were “acquired” by NJ
Transit. This is a lost opportunity, because the colorful transit history of
Public Service is well documented in a centennial corporate history of PSEG
published in 2003. (Full disclosure: that PSEG history was authored by Marian
Calabro, who has since become president of CorporateHistory.net. As a work of
New Jersey history, “Making
Things Work: PSEG’s First Century” is available at 25 libraries in the
Bergen County Cooperative Library Service and many others across the state.)
Personality: D
NJ Transit’s business history is almost completely absent.
The focus is on Executive Director Veronique Hakim. Her bio is lengthy, but
it’s basically a list of positions and a recap of the scope of her duties. Inexcusably,
the stats given in her bio don’t agree with the stats at the top of the page.
For example, her bio says NJ Transit runs 261 bus routes; the introductory text
says it runs 236. Our Commandment 9
of About Us pages is, “Worship clarity.” On a one-page site, discrepancies
such as these are glaring.
Under Board Members, only names, titles, and photos are
given. What’s the point of including this, if no further comment or contact
information is supplied?
Accessibility: E
Contact information is under the Directions / Address &
Phone heading. It consists of the address and main phone numbers for NJ
Transit’s headquarters and two other buildings. No other means of contact
(email, fax, social media) is provided. A great deal of space is dedicated to
giving every possible option for travel by car or mass transit to each of the
three locations ... But should we wish to visit NJ Transit, this page offers no
way to figure out whether we ought to visit the headquarters, the general
office building, or the administration building, or what person or department
we should ask for when we got there.
TAKEAWAY
Think about the audience for your About Us page, and be sure
to offer information they can use, in a layout that lets them find it. At the
same time, include sufficient company history.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company, although its president,
Marian Calabro, covered the transit-related history of NJ Transit predecessor
PSEG in her centennnial
history of the latter company.
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Monday, March 30, 2015
Dr Pepper Snapple Group: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
Dr Pepper Snapple Group (DPS) is one of the world’s leading
beverage companies and the top producer of flavored carbonated soft drinks in
the Americas. A publicly traded company headquartered in Plano, Texas, DPS has
21 manufacturing centers, over 115 distribution centers, and about 19,000
employees. Through a century-long sequence of mergers and acquisitions, the
company’s brands include A&W Root Beer, 7Up, Hawaiian Punch, Nantucket
Nectars, Sunkist, Schweppes, and of course, Dr Pepper (created in 1885) and
Snapple (created in 1973). The main About Us page is Our Company.
OVERALL GRADE: B
The DPS site suffers from a tendency toward elegance at the
expense of functionality. We first noticed it on the Awards
page, which has many pretty pictures, but no text related to awards. Then we
accidentally discovered that hovering over a photo reveals text. And then we
felt we had to try hovering over every
image on every page, just in case we
were missing something. Yes, the bold graphic look of images without text is
elegant, but marketing mavens know that captions are one of the most-read elements
on any page. It’s a waste not to have captions on permanent display, ideally in
service to company history. At the very, very least, a “hover here for more
info” graphic will ensure that visitors realize text is available.
Products/Services: C
The main About Us page has five teasers (brands, investing,
sustainability, operations, mission) in a sensible layout with well-chosen
photos. Unfortunately, the page lacks a concise statement of DPS’s nature and
purpose. Plenty of relevant information appears on the Operations, Mission, Leadership Team,
and History
pages, but for visitors who get no further, a summary should appear on the main
About Us page.
The History page
offers some good corporate storytelling. Why not make it more vivid with vintage
ads or logos of some of the DPS beverages that have been popular for decades?
Given that DPS is a conglomeration of brands, an illustrated timeline might
work even better than a narrative.
Our Commandment 10
of About Us pages is, “Remember to keep holy the updates.” The last tweets
on the Our Company
page are a year old! However, the site’s home page has an active Twitter
feed, so apparently this glitch just means that no one at DPS has cast a
critical eye on Our
Company for quite a while.
Speaking of discrepancies: why does the Mission page have
no obvious relation to the Values
page? Why does Our
Operations introduce “Rapid Continuous Improvement (RCI),” which seems like
a either value or a way to implement a mission, but isn’t mentioned elsewhere?
Our Commandment
9 of About Us pages is, “Worship clarity.” That includes looking for discrepancies
throughout the site and adjusting the focus on business history as needed.
Sites as large as DPS’s require frequent checking to make sure they remain
internally consistent.
Personality: A
At the foot of the main About Us page, in
a carousel display, are company leaders, each with a photo, name, title, and
link to a full bio. This is a welcome innovation. The bios are top notch: they
mention not just where the person has worked, but what he contributed at each job.
(Alas, there are no female executives at this level.)
Bravo also to the FAQ
(available from the Contact
page), which presents just the sort of questions that consumers with inquiring
minds like to ask: “Why is it called ‘cream soda’?” “What exactly is Dr.
Pepper?” “Did Yogi Berra ever own Yoo-hoo?”
Accessibility: C
The Contact
page (accessed via a link in the footer) is sparse but adequate: USPS and phone
information for 5 different departments, plus a form for sending an email for
half a dozen different reasons (consumer questions, media inquiries, potential
suppliers, etc.). This would be an ideal place to encourage interaction on
social media, but the social media icons are confined to tiny print in the
footer.
TAKEAWAY
The main About Us page should always have a quick summary of
your company as well as great pics and teasers, for the sake of visitors who
choose not to explore any other pages. And always, always, always check that
pages within your site are consistent and coherent.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, March 16, 2015
Omaha Steaks: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
In 1898, the Simon brothers landed at Ellis Island after
fleeing religious persecution in Eastern Europe. A transcontinental train took
them to Nebraska, which looked like their native Latvia. There they resumed
their profession as butchers, founding their own company in 1917 to provide
high-quality beef to restaurants and grocers. In time they expanded to mail
order, retail locations, and sales via telephone and Internet. Today the company
– one of America’s largest marketers of beef – is privately held and run by the
fourth and fifth generations of Simons. Its 1,800 employees are still based in Omaha.
The main About Us page is Our Company,
accessed via About / Company Info in the footer of every page.
OVERALL GRADE: A
Products/Services: A
Omaha Steaks has condensed most of their About Us material
into one page, Our
Company. It includes a pithy summary of the company: its business,
location, divisions (with links to each), and employees. Sidebars left and
right illustrate the company’s mouth-watering products, offer testimonials, and
provide contact information. Our Commandment 7
of About Us pages is, “Keep navigation easy.” Omaha Steaks does that.
Unobtrusively positioned on the top right of Our Company is a
link, “Read about our company’s heritage.” It takes visitors to a sequence of history
pages: Our
Beginnings, Customers Nationwide,
Reputation,
An Overview,
and Tradition
Continues. These pages make us giddy with delight.
First of all, they form a well-written narrative company history,
laid out in a way that makes it easy to get through them all. (If all this
information had been squashed onto one page, how many visitors would have made
it to the end?) Second, the text covers all the bases: the who, why, and where
of the company founders, the reason for the company name, the development of various
forms of distribution (mail order, phone, Internet), notable awards, company
divisions, and the current management. Each page is illustrated with an
appropriate photo. High marks to Omaha Steaks for their corporate storytelling!
Our only quibble is that the teaser and link to the business
history pages on the main About Us page
should be made more enticing, perhaps by using one of the vintage images used
on the history pages.
Personality: A
Our Commandment 3
of About Us pages is, “Reveal thy personality.” Surprisingly few companies
do as good a job of this as Omaha Steaks. Its personality comes through very
strongly in the History pages, which start by describing
the founders and finish by stating
that the fourth and fifth generations of the same family are now running the
company.
Accessibility: A
Omaha Steaks does much of their business online or by phone,
and they make it easy to order. The header has a toll-free number, store
locations, and a live chat option. The footer has a link to a Customer Care page that offers all these options.
TAKEAWAY
Let a well-written corporate history explain why your
products are so good and make visitors to your site eager to deal with you.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Tuesday, March 3, 2015
Garda World Security: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
Garda World Security was founded in 1995 by Stephan Cretier,
using money from a second mortgage on his home. Headquartered in Montreal, it
is now one of the world’s ten largest security providers – notably of armored
cars and security guards. Garda has more than 200 offices in the Americas,
Europe, Africa, Asia, and the Middle East. It is also one of the top three cash
logistics brands in North America, handling more than $5 billion (!) every day.
The main About Us page is here.
OVERALL GRADE: B
Products/Services: C
The main
About Us page – the one that the About link in the footer leads to – gives
a good summary of Garda’s purpose and its global reach. But as an introduction
to the site and to Garda company history in general, it’s weak. The top of this
page (and several others in the About Us section) is occupied by an image that
fills most of the space on a desktop screen. Here, it’s a scene of a highway at
night that has no obvious relation to Garda.
The size of the photo is a serious problem because the
left-hand navigation menu is tacked onto it, so the menu that should entice
visitors is out of sight once they scroll down to the page’s text.
And there are more problems. The divisions of the company
aren’t mentioned in the text of the main About Us page. Why not have photos with captions as teasers? The
links within the text to other pages on the site are formatted in a discretely
elegant way that makes them easy to miss.
Another problem: on the main About Us page, the menu
options are Our Businesses, Locations, News and Media, and Careers. But in the
footer of every page, the About menu offers the choices of Our Team, Fast
Facts, Our History, Governance, and Garda in the Community. The inconsistency
is confusing.
Personality: A
The Our Team page starts
off right with a bio of Stephan Cretier (Garda’s founder, chairman, president
and CEO) that sets out how he founded the company and segues into its current
global scope. Nice use of corporate storytelling!
We do cavil at some of the phrasing. For example: “Named
‘Entrepreneur of the Decade’ by Profit Magazine in 2011 as one of eleven
remarkable Canadian CEOs, Stephan Cretier is ...”: was Cretier the Entrepreneur
of the Decade, or one of eleven remarkable Canadian CEOs, or both? Our Commandment 9
of About Us pages is “Worship clarity.” That includes making sure that
every sentence is unambiguous.
Accessibility: B
A red Contact Us bar at the foot of every page allows
visitors to send an email. The Contact
page (accessible via the footer) offers only an online form for contact.
Clicking the link within the text to Locations takes us to a
page that has phones and addresses. But the existence of that page isn’t
obvious due to the annoyingly subtle format used for links.
TAKEAWAY
Take care to make navigation easy and obvious, and never be
elegant at the expense of ease of use. Your business history deserves to be
easily accessible.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
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Monday, February 16, 2015
Ideal Industries: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
Ideal Industries, founded by J. Walter Becker in 1916, was by
1949 America’s largest producer of wire nuts. Headquartered in Sycamore,
Illinois, the company (still privately owned) produces connectors, hand tools,
testers and meters for the electrical and telecommunications industries. Ideal
Industries’ main About Us page is here.
OVERALL GRADE: B
Products/Services: B
On the About Us menu, the first item is a page of Featured Stories,
which cover the product that brought Ideal Industries fame (wire
connectors) as well as more recent innovations (a DC
power connector that reduces energy costs). The second page on the menu, Our Story,
has a good 2-paragraph summary of the company’s products and the breadth of
applications they’re used in. We especially like this crisp example of
corporate storytelling: “We’re best known for our wire connectors, which have
become the go-to standard for electrical connections around the world, but our
innovations also touch the sky -- where nearly every commercial jet flying
today was made using IDEAL wire strippers. We’ve reached the moon, as part of
the critical equipment on NASA missions. Best of all, we touch the daily lives
of skilled tradesmen around the globe….”
Why not add links from there to the various featured
stories? It’s such an easy and effective way to guide visitors to other content
on the site.
The Our History
timeline has a good selection of milestones, including products, awards,
acquisitions, and leadership. Each has a logo or another type of
illustration. Well done!
Our Commandment 6
of About Us pages is, “Honor thy visuals.” Why not include images such as
those on the timeline on other pages? The first 3 images on the main About Us
page (Our
Story) seem to be from a school tour of the company’s plant--an odd choice
of illustration. One is a link to a video that we’ve never been able to play. Even
if it’s brilliant, the other images need to stand on their own, which they
don’t.
Personality: A
The company’s founder, J. Walter Becker, is frequently
mentioned as being the inspiration for the values that still drive this
family-owned business. On the Executive
Staff page, each officer has a bio plus a sentence or two on his or her
strategy, and a quotation. This is an excellent way to convey the aims and
personality of the current leadership.
Accessibility: D
Our Commandment 8
of About Us pages is, “Remember to make yourself and your organization
easily accessible.” Because Ideal’s pages stress their commitment to
collaborate with the professionals who use their products, we were surprised
that the Contact Us page has no email address or online form for contacting the
company--just a mailing address and telephone.
TAKEAWAY
As Ideal Industries approaches its 100th business
anniversary in 2016, it has a strong history base to build on. But if you
advertise yourself as being responsive to customer feedback or proud of
collaborating with customers, be sure to make it easy for them to get in touch.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section
accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks
we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential customers:
Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for us?), and
Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
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Monday, February 9, 2015
Happy 50th, 1010 WINS
"You give us 22 minutes, we'll give you ... a headache." That's how I twisted the 1010 WINS tagline when I heard the station booming from the radio in the mailroom of a film company I worked for. The distinctive clatter that ran behind the voices would drift down the hall and upset my train of thought. Well, 1010 WINS has the last laugh. I'm still listening.
This iconic station celebrates its business anniversary of 50 years on April 19, 2015. "You give us 22 minutes, we'll give you the world" proved such a sturdy concept that it's still going strong. While teletype machines are defunct, the clattery background sound remains. Along with the distinctive voices of WINS reporters, it separates 1010 from other talk stations. The idea of turning a rock music station into a "talking newspaper" was visionary 50 years ago and remains central to 1010 WINS's corporate story.
Like everyone else who relies on "the most listened-to station in the nation," I feel that the people at 1010 WINS are part of my extended family. Here's where you'll find the station's history (page shown above), but WINS or its corporate parent (CBS NY) unfortunately makes it hard to locate. (Remember Commandment 7 of our 10 Commandments of About Us Pages: "Keep Navigation Easy.") I had to Google various phrases in order to arrive at this page and others. Dear WINS friends: Please make it easier for your fans to go straight to your history! It's fun to browse the biggest NY events and celebs of the past five decades. TIP: This chunking by decade is a good idea for businesses seeking an accessible way to celebrate their corporate anniversaries and company timelines.
P.S. Big thanks for leaving the late, great Stan Brooks in the roster of reporters. I only wish Judy DeAngelis was still with you.
This iconic station celebrates its business anniversary of 50 years on April 19, 2015. "You give us 22 minutes, we'll give you the world" proved such a sturdy concept that it's still going strong. While teletype machines are defunct, the clattery background sound remains. Along with the distinctive voices of WINS reporters, it separates 1010 from other talk stations. The idea of turning a rock music station into a "talking newspaper" was visionary 50 years ago and remains central to 1010 WINS's corporate story.
Like everyone else who relies on "the most listened-to station in the nation," I feel that the people at 1010 WINS are part of my extended family. Here's where you'll find the station's history (page shown above), but WINS or its corporate parent (CBS NY) unfortunately makes it hard to locate. (Remember Commandment 7 of our 10 Commandments of About Us Pages: "Keep Navigation Easy.") I had to Google various phrases in order to arrive at this page and others. Dear WINS friends: Please make it easier for your fans to go straight to your history! It's fun to browse the biggest NY events and celebs of the past five decades. TIP: This chunking by decade is a good idea for businesses seeking an accessible way to celebrate their corporate anniversaries and company timelines.
P.S. Big thanks for leaving the late, great Stan Brooks in the roster of reporters. I only wish Judy DeAngelis was still with you.
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Monday, February 2, 2015
Nikon Corporation: “About Us” Evaluation by Corporate History.net
Nikon was founded in 1917 as Japan Optical Industries. It
still specializes in optics and imaging products, notably the cameras and
lenses for which the company is now named. Headquartered in Tokyo, it is one of
the companies of the Mitsubishi Group. The company’s main About Us page is here.
OVERALL GRADE: C
minus
Products/Services: C
Our Commandment 7
of About Us Pages is, “Keep navigation easy.” We've read many fascinating
pages on Nikon’s site, but we’re not at all sure we could find them again, or
that we haven't missed important material. The problem begins with the main About Us page, where the
above-the-fold space is taken up with the teasers for Corporate Information, Responsibility, and Investor Relations. It’s
easy to miss the below-the-fold links to Technology and Feel Nikon, pages
where the company’s products and innovations have a chance to shine. Smaller
images with more explanatory subheads would work better here.
The navigation problem continues with hierarchy of menus and
naming of pages. Who would guess from its title that the Life with Nikon
page (under Technology) is an overview of Nikon’s cutting-edge technology? Recollections
is a great page, in terms of company history and showing the innovations that
Nikon has created over the last 98 years. But from the main About Us page, it’s
difficult to find. (It’s under Feel
Nikon.)
Likewise, the company timeline,
with its well-chosen illustrations for nearly every item, provides a great
overview of products ... but it’s buried under About / Corporate Information /
History / Corporate History, without any indication in its title that it is, in
fact, an illustrated business history timeline. Once found, it offers a
thoughtful touch: the option of seeing all or no images, and corporate events
or products or both.
Personality: C
Under Corporate
Information, the first teaser is for the Message from the
President, which covers (in brisk but informative terms) the company’s
goals for its imaging products, microscope solutions, medical, and other
divisions. Well done, even if the corporate storytelling aspect is a bit dry. Sadly,
the bios accessible through the Board of Directors
page are the driest we have ever seen, consisting of a bulleted timeline of
years and job titles for each person.
Nikon’s Philosophy
page, where one might expect a glimpse of the company’s guiding principles, has
vague terminology and graphics that don’t elucidate. What company would not
subscribe to commitments to “Be pro-active,” “Seek new knowledge,” “Communicate
well,” and “Display integrity”? Our Commandment 2
of About Us Pages is, “Thou shalt not generalize.” Statements as vague as Nikon’s
won’t hold the attention of fickle web surfers.
Accessibility: D
The Contacts
page (accessible from the footer on every page) funnels visitors to either
consumer or industrial products, and then to specific products, each with its
own contact information. Although there is a lengthy warning about the risk of
transmitting ideas to Nikon (“Nikon Corporation has no obligation for
monitoring any ideas, concepts, suggestions or comments you transmit to this
Site by electronic mail or otherwise”), there seems to be no way to email the
corporate headquarters or any part of the company.
TAKEAWAY
Make sure that your content is great, and then make sure
visitors won’t get exasperated and leave before they find it. This is
especially important for a company like Nikon, as it presumably prepares to
celebrate a centennial business anniversary in just two years. Polish that
centennial brand name until it shines!
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section accurately
convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks we
evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential
customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for
us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). To talk about your About Us
page, contact us!
Today’s example was chosen at random;
CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
Labels:
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