Monday, April 30, 2012
“About Us” Evaluation: Sullivan & Cromwell Gets an A
Thursday, April 26, 2012
Marian Calabro to appear on "Mysteries at the Museum" in May (say it 5X fast)
Monday, April 16, 2012
“About Us” Evaluation: United Gets a D
United is one of the world’s largest airlines, with more than 86,000 employees and more than 700 aircraft. Now headquartered in Chicago, its roots are in Boise, Idaho, where in 1926 Varney Air Lines offered the first scheduled airline service in the United States. Varney was purchased by Walter Boeing, who merged his company with Pratt-Whitney in 1929 to form United Aircraft and Transport Company. In 2011, United merged with Continental Airlines.
There is no About Us page on United.com. The only company information is at UnitedContinentalHoldings.com.
OVERALL GRADE: D
Accessibility: C
With its tabs for Media Center and Investor Relations, the website is clearly not aimed at the general public. Contact information for the media and investors is adequate. But given that people sometimes stumble about on the Net, it would be kind to offer a link for past and future fliers to the well-designed Contact page on United.com.
Products/Services: E
The main About Us page is a list of five bulleted points set against a blank white background. They’re good points, but why not show some images? Nothing here entices us to read a page full of small text.
In fact, it’s a major flaw on the UnitedContinentalHoldings.com site that the only images of planes are the ones provided for download on the Media Center. The background on almost every page is a vast expanse of white that does nothing to recall United’s “friendly skies.” The only exception is the Company History page, which instead has a vast expanse of blue-striped clouds.
And about that Company History page: United has had over 80 years of innovative and memorable history. The timeline on the Company History page starts with the year 2010 – yes, 2010. Within the 2 years covered, the events listed are almost all trivial, as for example, “Mileage Plus Elites Get Seating Benefits on Continental.” Who cares?
Timelines written for public consumption need to be reduced to essentials, and readers need to be told why these particular events are noteworthy.
Several of the pages on UnitedContinentalHoldings.com offer a downloadable Fact Sheet. Unfortunately, although there’s plenty of empty space on these pages, we’re not given any teasers about what’s on this fact sheet, so we have no particular reason to exert ourselves to click on it.
Personality: E
The website for UnitedContinentalHolding.com is executed in crisp blue and white, but the content is bland. The Leadership page has a list of names and titles. Click on one and you’re sent to a cookie-cutter bio: education and previous positions. Nowhere is there an indication of where these leaders are moving the company at this turning point in its history.
We have noticed when writing these evaluations that as a heading for About Us pages, “media” is ambiguous. Sometimes it means “Here are mentions of our company in the media,” and sometimes it means “Hey, media people, here’s your information.” On this site it’s the latter. There is no page for mentions of United Continental Holding by the media: another missed opportunity for bringing the company’s best publicity to the fore.
TAKEAWAY
Even on a site aimed at media and investors, About Us pages should make it obvious what the company’s product is and why it’s worth spending our money on.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). Contact us if you’d like to have your site evaluated—there’s no charge and no obligation.
Today’s example was chosen at random; CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
“About Us” Evaluation: United Gets a D
United is one of the world’s largest airlines, with more than 86,000 employees and more than 700 aircraft. Now headquartered in Chicago, its roots are in Boise, Idaho, where in 1926 Varney Air Lines offered the first scheduled airline service in the United States. Varney was purchased by Walter Boeing, who merged his company with Pratt-Whitney in 1929 to form United Aircraft and Transport Company. In 2011, United merged with Continental Airlines.
There is no About Us page on United.com. The only company information is at UnitedContinentalHoldings.com.
Accessibility: COVERALL GRADE: D
With its tabs for Media Center and Investor Relations, the UnitedContinentalHoldings.com website is clearly not aimed at the general public. Contact information for the media and investors is adequate. But given that people sometimes stumble about on the Net, it would be kind to offer a link for past and future fliers to the well-designed Contact page on United.com.
Products/Services: E
The main About Us page is a list of five bulleted points set against a blank white background. They’re good points, but why not show some images? Nothing here entices us to read a page full of small text.
In fact, it’s a major flaw on the UnitedContinentalHoldings.com site that the only images of planes are the ones provided for download on the Media Center. The background on almost every page is a vast expanse of white that does nothing to recall United’s “friendly skies.” The only exception is the Company History page, which instead has a vast expanse of blue-striped clouds.
And about that Company History page: United has had over 80 years of innovative and memorable history. The timeline on the Company History page starts with the year 2010 – yes, 2010. Within the 2 years covered, the events listed are almost all trivial, as for example, “Mileage Plus Elites Get Seating Benefits on Continental.” Who cares?
Timelines written for public consumption need to be reduced to essentials, and readers need to be told why these particular events are noteworthy.
Several of the pages on UnitedContinentalHoldings.com offer a downloadable Fact Sheet. Unfortunately, although there’s plenty of empty space on these pages, we’re not given any teasers about what’s on this fact sheet, so we have no particular reason to exert ourselves to click on it.
Personality: E
The website for UnitedContinentalHolding.com is executed in crisp blue and white, but the content is bland. The Leadership page has a list of names and titles. Click on one and you’re sent to a cookie-cutter bio: education and previous positions. Nowhere is there an indication of where these leaders are moving the company at this turning point in its history.
We have noticed when writing these evaluations that as a heading for About Us pages, “media” is ambiguous. Sometimes it means “Here are mentions of our company in the media,” and sometimes it means “Hey, media people, here’s your information.” On this site it’s the latter. There is no page for mentions of United Continental Holding by the media: another missed opportunity for bringing the company’s best publicity to the fore.
TAKEAWAY
Even on a site aimed at media and investors, About Us pages should make it obvious what the company’s product is and why it’s worth spending our money on.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). Contact us if you’d like to have your site evaluated—there’s no charge and no obligation.
Today’s example was chosen at random; CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.
Monday, April 9, 2012
Calling All BIOgraphers
Some highlights:
* Optional Friday tours of the Margaret Herrick Library at the Academy of Motion Picture and Arts, the UCLA Film & TV Archive, and/or the Huntington Library
* Saturday panels featuring writers, publishers, media specialists, and agents
* Sunday Master Classes for writers on YA nonfiction, literary biography, alternatives to traditional pubishing, and how to make research more manageable.
Whether you're a writer, a biography buff, a movie-lover, or just someone who likes being around friendly, creative people—-this conference will be memorable.
Go here to find out more and register: http://tinyurl.com/ykqx4x7.
Monday, April 2, 2012
“About Us” Evaluation: John Deere Gets an A
Deere & Company, a Fortune 500 company headquartered in
OVERALL GRADE: A
The About Us pages on John Deere’s site are easy to navigate and do an excellent job of conveying what the company produces and how it operates. In addition, the pages convey a quiet pride that’s very appealing.
Personality, Products, and Services: A
The main About Us page is straightforward and no-nonsense, like the equipment John Deere produces. Each of the four headings (“Our core values,” “Our leadership,” “Our strategy for success,” “Doing business with us”) comes with a teaser that clarifies what the company does and how it does it. If you got no further than this page, you’d still know the basics about John Deere.
The pages for each of the headings keep the focus on what John Deere produces. The Core Values page, for example, starts by mentioning the company’s founder and relates his values to the present company – not just once, but several times.
In a column at the right of the About Us page is a great teaser for the History page: “Today, Deere & Company is one of the world’s most admired businesses. But in 1837, John Deere, blacksmith and inventor, had little more than a blacksmith shop, a discarded steel saw, and an idea that would help farmers, changing the face of agriculture for all time.” Again, the founder’s principles are shown to be closely related to the present company.
The History page is another winner: options (with teasers) for a Timeline, Past Leaders (eight of the greatest, with their achievements), Trademarks, and the company’s 175th anniversary. We are particularly charmed by the pages that show and comment on John Deere trademarks through the past 175 years. Such an awareness of the company’s heritage and pride in it are all too rare. All these pages have excellent illustrations and on-topic content. They are a model of what properly told history can do for promoting your business today.
Accessibility: A plus
The link to the Contact Us page is buried in small print at the lower right of the About Us page, but it’s a great page, with numerous specific, helpful options. Want to buy equipment? Choose between links to local dealers, online dealers, or the nearest Lowes or Home Depot. Need a part? Look through a parts catalogue. Have a question about a product? Navigate to a manual. Have a question about financing, crop insurance, employment? All the links are there. if your query truly falls under “Other,” the final option on the page is the ubiquitous online contact form, thoughtfully laid out so it’s only a half page long.
TAKEAWAY
An About Us page should convey clearly and immediately what the company offers and what its core values are, and should give options for visitors who want to learn more. In all these respects, John Deere is an excellent model.
Does your Web site’s “About Us” section accurately convey your organization’s history and capabilities? Every two weeks we evaluate one example, grading it in three areas that are key to potential customers: Personality (Who are you?), Products/Services (What can you do for us?), and Accessibility (How can we reach you?). Contact us if you’d like to have your site evaluated—there’s no charge and no obligation.
Today’s example was chosen at random; CorporateHistory.net has no ties to this company.